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Temptress
Temptress
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Challenge: Free Study 2017-02 (Standard Editing)
Camera: Nikon D810
Lens: Nikon AF Nikkor 50mm f/1.8D
Location: In Studio
Date: Feb 13, 2017
Aperture: 13.0
ISO: 64
Shutter: 1/200
Date Uploaded: Feb 16, 2017

Shot in studio, 24" octabox with grid at camera right, back lit with second light directly behind subject on edge of table. Honeycomb grid on second light to reduce light spill.

Statistics
Place: 71 out of 123
Avg (all users): 5.4247
Avg (commenters): 6.0000
Avg (participants): 5.2586
Avg (non-participants): 6.0667
Views since voting: 137
Views during voting: 116
Votes: 73
Comments: 4
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03/08/2017 11:29:46 AM
Hello from the critique club

An appealing image that makes a contribution to the challenge.

I think your commenters have given you some useful critique here. They are all correct to a degree, unfortunately this is not quite working because there feels a general underexposure combined with some rim lighting together with stray lighting that is partially illuminating areas that donít really help the end result. I think you are to be commended for trying to create something original probably of a low key nature but it didnít quite work to its best. I do quite like it but what lets it down most is the rim lighting of the leg its counter to the feel of everything else going on here
 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/03/2017 06:11:20 PM
looks like an awesome portrait, too dark for me to see any awesome details. wich there was more exposure to it
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/03/2017 01:32:37 PM
Very nice partial silhouette.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
03/02/2017 02:45:58 PM
I think the dark grey background really hurts this. I don't mind the idea of a rim light here, but the background and floor being kind of lit gives this the impression of underexposed (not a pun!)
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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