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03/08/2017 11:29:46 AM |
Hello from the critique club
An appealing image that makes a contribution to the challenge.
I think your commenters have given you some useful critique here. They are all correct to a degree, unfortunately this is not quite working because there feels a general underexposure combined with some rim lighting together with stray lighting that is partially illuminating areas that don’t really help the end result. I think you are to be commended for trying to create something original probably of a low key nature but it didn’t quite work to its best. I do quite like it but what lets it down most is the rim lighting of the leg its counter to the feel of everything else going on here |
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03/03/2017 06:11:20 PM |
| looks like an awesome portrait, too dark for me to see any awesome details. wich there was more exposure to it |
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03/03/2017 01:32:37 PM |
| Very nice partial silhouette. |
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03/02/2017 02:45:58 PM |
| I think the dark grey background really hurts this. I don't mind the idea of a rim light here, but the background and floor being kind of lit gives this the impression of underexposed (not a pun!) |
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