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Abra


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Music IV (Standard Editing)
Collection: People/Street/Candid
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark II
Lens: Canon EF 24-105mm f/4.0L IS
Location: School of Rock, Sutherland Australia
Date: Mar 11, 2017
Aperture: 4.0
ISO: 1600
Shutter: 1/100
Date Uploaded: Mar 12, 2017

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03/14/2017 04:09:32 PM
I can see what you were going for here, but I think this could be better. Here would be my suggestions.

1. This is a portrait, but the face is not in focus. I understand that you focused on the guitar, but since her face is here, it's a portrait. Either have the face in focus, or crop so that the top have of her is not in the photo.

2. That ceiling light is the brightest thing in the photo, and it's not appealing. Maybe move around to not have those ceiling lights shown.

3. It's a bit dark for my tastes.
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