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When a pen dance with a pencil
When a pen dance with a pencil
kaiyang


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: What is this Pencil II (Standard Editing)
Camera: Sony Alpha a7R II
Lens: Sony SAL-50M28 Normal AF D 50mm f/2.8 Macro AF
Location: my room
Date: Apr 1, 2017
Aperture: 4.0
ISO: 2500
Shutter: 1/30
Date Uploaded: Apr 1, 2017

A miniature shot using a pen and a pencil. A rhytmic gymnastics interpretation using the pencil with its shaving as the ribbon wand.

Statistics
Place: 14 out of 33
Avg (all users): 5.8868
Avg (commenters): 6.2500
Avg (participants): 5.5000
Avg (non-participants): 6.0541
Views since voting: 250
Views during voting: 112
Votes: 53
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
04/12/2017 10:47:57 AM
Thank you all for the votes and comments. All the comments have been very encouraging, and pointers that I will take note in future shots.
04/12/2017 08:33:04 AM
Hello from the critique club

An appealing image that contributes to the challenge

This is a great idea Yao. I really like the way you have combined these together, its an interesting and original concept that works well. What I feel would improve it is for the wood shavings to also be sharp. You have a plain black background so against that having everything nice and sharp would definitely improve its impact.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/11/2017 07:51:23 PM
Fun idea.
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04/10/2017 10:41:54 PM
great entry makes me smile
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04/07/2017 08:34:28 AM
Well done
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04/05/2017 04:30:34 PM
Composition: 9
Technical: 6 - A bit soft.
Creativity: 9
Appeal: 7
Challenge: 6
Overall Calculated Average Score: 7

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