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02/15/2003 11:22:54 AM |
*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: Great shot, well lit. Not sure what the $20 and pen are for. Good choice of subject
CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.
COMPOSITION: The composition is excellent. I love the "line" of the left side of the guitar against the left edge of the frame.
TECHNICAL: Black and white was a very good choice for this shot. Lighting and exposure are nearly flawless. My only complaint is the hot spot on the front of the guitar.
CONCLUSION: Great shot. It's a shame you hadn't understood the challenge before you shot this, as without the pen and money it would probably have done even better.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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02/06/2003 03:40:33 PM |
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02/06/2003 10:41:48 AM |
| I don't think that the pen and note and pick add anything to the shot. |
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02/05/2003 09:06:23 PM |
| Excellent! I love the perspective you took. The clarity is perfection. Don't know why there's a pen on your guitar, it doesn't make sense to me, unless it's there to sign autographs of your adoring fans. |
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02/05/2003 05:49:47 PM |
| I really like this picture being done in black and white. The lighting you used also helps create intrest in the picture. Nice work |
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02/05/2003 05:01:16 PM |
| You know... I've got the same guitar, only gloss black with rosewood fret board. I'm going to have to make a great looking guitar picture like this one. :) I think you should have made the white a little whiter tho. |
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02/04/2003 10:48:27 PM |
| I really like this photo - my brother would love it (being a guitarist). Perspective and framing are wonderful. I think the money, pen and pick detract from it slightly though - I would have kept the guitar on it's own. It's a really nice picture overall - definitely worthy of printing. |
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02/04/2003 09:54:36 AM |
| You certaily have me wondering which is which :) Great shot. |
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02/04/2003 03:06:11 AM |
| Wonderful composition. Focus is perfect and your b&w choice is splendid. The border is just right. Can´t see what can be done better. Good luck! |
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02/03/2003 02:40:59 PM |
| Good picture, very creative.dt5 |
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02/03/2003 02:12:24 PM |
Composition: Good. Top-right looks slightly blank, although this is offset by bottom-left.
Technical: Excellent focus. Looks slightly over-sharpened, particularly around the part the strings are connected to and the scratch plate (?). Good use of B&W I think. Border seems a little thin on my screen.
Meets challenge: Bit iffy. :-)
Overall impression: Good pic. 7 |
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02/03/2003 07:43:13 AM |
| Nice shot, don't think the pen and money are needed though. Still love the tone. (no pun intended) |
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02/03/2003 04:42:17 AM |
| My guitar is really similar to this one! Yes, she is my babe indeed!! Good luck in the challenge! |
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