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06/27/2005 05:40:26 PM |
Self-critique, and including the biggest points made by commenters. I'm doing this to try to improve for future shots.
The Good:
+ color color color! complementary colors w/ high saturation
+ interesting and sharp detail on the peel
+ the darkness of the peel provides contrast to the bright areas, and separates the red and green areas
+ lighting, the lime looks like it's glowing, and good balance between background and foreground brightness
The Bad:
- some red bled through the the lime
- border too bold
- little yellow highlights
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11/17/2004 01:45:14 AM |
Congrats on your top ten finish Colin!
Very good detail here. My eyes still hurt looking at it! LOL
Well Done! |
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11/17/2004 12:57:01 AM |
Awsome color ideas. Great shot and congrats on top 10. |
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11/17/2004 12:12:22 AM |
Oooh, my second 6th place in a row! Whee!
Oh, and don't kick Eric! ;-) It's just me, searching for a fun title. It was originally a lime & lemon shot. Hence, "limon". |
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11/16/2004 11:56:15 PM |
If the title isn't a typo, Eric deserves a kick. Great color, though the border is a bit much. |
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11/16/2004 10:13:25 PM |
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11/16/2004 06:14:22 PM |
Nice, But I would have cloned out the 2 green spots on bottom of peel. 7 |
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11/16/2004 04:32:05 PM |
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11/16/2004 04:04:02 PM |
Great shot, very nice color contrast and lighting |
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11/16/2004 03:50:15 PM |
great work with your backlighting and capturing the colours in the lime |
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11/16/2004 06:23:03 AM |
i am going to go shoot this to see what background color i find the most pleasing. somehow, the red seems too strong, but i can't say for sure. |
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11/15/2004 08:14:09 AM |
What vivid coulours. Good in every respect |
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11/13/2004 06:56:20 AM |
Wow, nice high color contrast. Very interesting details in the lime(?)'s internals. |
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11/13/2004 02:26:30 AM |
absolutly beautiful, i wish I could have come up with this type of idea. Wonderful colors and positioning not to mention lighting. Best I've seen so far. |
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11/12/2004 11:28:22 AM |
Gorgeous colors. Makes me want a Corona. |
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11/12/2004 09:44:09 AM |
great color contrast, wonderfull definition, I really like this shot with only one small complaint. I dont like the tiney yellow dots on the bottom of the lime. One of my top picks. Keep up the great work. |
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11/11/2004 09:34:10 PM |
quite nice.. too bad we couldnt do spot edting to get rid of the stray pixels.
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11/11/2004 05:34:12 PM |
Wow, I love the colors and the texture! |
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11/11/2004 04:30:49 AM |
NICE FOTO..ONE OF MY FAVORITES...LOVE IT!! |
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11/10/2004 09:15:47 PM |
The border deosn't really compliment the picture but aside from that this is outstanding |
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11/10/2004 07:55:18 PM |
Excellent macro and use of color. My favorite in this challenge. 10 |
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11/10/2004 04:24:52 PM |
I love this, the red showing through is perfect. Not crazy about the boarder (and I usually like boarders) I think it takes away from the pure red. Still very cool 9 with the boarder 10 without. |
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11/10/2004 02:14:22 PM |
I guess this should have been a different tone of the red, doesn't quite go together, but i'll look at it again on a better calibrated monitor. White border is too bright imo. |
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11/10/2004 12:51:37 PM |
would have been better if it was actually in focus |
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11/10/2004 08:54:45 AM |
I'm not keen on the border, but other than that it's a great macro. The red is a bit 'in your face' though, maybe a more subtle colour would have worked better? |
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11/10/2004 03:38:13 AM |
Great colors, this is an excellent photo. The red background help sets it off. |
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11/10/2004 01:30:25 AM |
The border doesn' suit my taste, but I sure like the shot. |
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11/10/2004 01:17:13 AM |
i love the contrast and the blackness of the outside, i only give out one ten a challenge and you got it :) |
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