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08/16/2017 10:10:28 AM |
Hello from the critique club
An appealing image that meets the challenge well.
I have mixed feelings about this Marcel, on the one hand I like that you have thought about creating a more unique composition but I’m not sure it is working as you would like, I say that because the choice of left frame for the ‘base’ leaves it feeling as though it is toppling over and on its way down. The other issue is that these lines are all very strong in themselves, they do not lead in the traditional scene leading sense to a part of the image that you desire to be led into, the choice of subject is totally dominant it is the subject per se. |
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08/15/2017 05:59:45 PM |
| Strong lines, simple composition and a compelling background. |
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08/14/2017 08:38:14 PM |
| Look! Up in the sky! It's a bird! It's a crane! :) |
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08/09/2017 04:50:19 AM |
I feel that this photo misses out on the leading lines but is a nice picture
vote 4 |
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