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02/20/2003 11:52:17 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club };-)
Initial thoughts
Fantastic shot, one of my faves this week, meets the challenge
Composition/ Content
Personally when I originally saw this shot I loved it. I really thought it was a ribbon winner. I like most everything about it. The softness of the lighting and tones give it a haunted look that is very appealing.
Background
The lighting is excellent but there is one spot just above you that is a bit hot. I'm not sure you could have done better though.
Camera Work - Technical
Focus seems good and the contrast is excellent for all of the white you have here. I know that some folks didn't like the squares in the cloth where you leaned against it but I think that adds to the shot.
Digital Processing - Technical
Once again, nothing of consequence to improve.
Fits The Challenge
Definitely fits the challenge well.
My Opinion On The Photo
I was tremendously surprised to see that my shot finished higher than this one. I am a big fan of yours and this shot in particular. Keep up the great work.
I would be happy to talk further about this shot if you would like to contact me.
DougPaz
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02/17/2003 10:30:27 AM |
Thanks a lot for the comments and votes.
The description of this photo tells how it's done. Just want to add to that, that I used a 500 Watt worklight on a stand at about 4 ft distance.
I did try some shots whith a more soft lighting and with the light at a longer distance, but it made the image look flat and less dramatic.
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02/16/2003 10:27:05 PM |
| Really well done, I love the B & W and the feel and tone of the shot. Great job, one of my favorites this week. |
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02/16/2003 09:32:01 PM |
| I like this. Good job! I appreciate the barely there appearance, and the composition works well. |
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02/16/2003 07:06:27 PM |
| You need to pay attention to details, such as a straight and smooth background. That would have improved this photo immensely. You need better, more evenly distributed light. Personally I don't like the way you hid Waldo. But that's just me. It's nothing like the Waldo books way of hiding him - out in the open but so hard to spot, among all the other people, places, and things. |
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02/15/2003 08:15:09 PM |
| I really like the simplicity of your picture. One of my top picks this week. |
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02/15/2003 06:03:28 PM |
| My fav foto this week hands down. Love the folds in the draped sheet. A small thing , but I personally would like the hands portion a tad more off centre. Another very minor quibble is the squarish texture embedded in the sheet. I find this attracts my attention and diverts it away from the power of the delecate figure. The concept is superior to most of the shots of this week. Technically a very good shot. Tons of expressive power in this image that speaks well of your creative talent. |
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02/14/2003 12:59:06 PM |
| I like this effect, although there may be a bit much in the backlighting - the person is too visible for this type of shot. Nice work. |
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02/14/2003 12:12:02 PM |
| I like this a lot. Great lines, in both the conceled person and the sheet. |
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02/13/2003 10:34:14 PM |
| Well done. The texture adds to the illusion. I'd like to know how you set this up. |
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02/13/2003 09:11:01 PM |
| This is nice work... I really like the white... I can't really say much more... great work :) = 10 - setzler |
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02/13/2003 06:42:54 PM |
| Vey nice effect. I like how everything is diffused. Good job and good luck. One of my favourites. Jacko. 9 |
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02/13/2003 04:02:29 PM |
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02/12/2003 12:24:41 AM |
| Wow that's a very nice image. I looks like a painting almost. Excellent. 9. |
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02/11/2003 07:47:26 PM |
| Peek a boo! Interesting effect. Is this black and white? 7 Swash |
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02/11/2003 06:15:49 AM |
| Great photo you will do well this one, this is one I would put on my wall. Good job. |
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02/10/2003 09:39:03 PM |
| Excellent shot. Nice idea. Nice soft mood. One of my favs this week. 10 |
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02/10/2003 07:26:33 PM |
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02/10/2003 03:59:53 PM |
| Not only is this very well done, its amusing too. Great job! |
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02/10/2003 03:55:48 PM |
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02/10/2003 02:37:40 PM |
| very nice shot. one of my favourites for this week |
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02/10/2003 01:57:46 PM |
| This is SO good! If people know anything about photography I´m sure you will win this week. Great composition. Perfect in b&w. The low contrast is perfect. One of the best for weeks. Good luck! |
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02/10/2003 01:19:36 PM |
| Awesome photo. Looks just like a ghost. I like the canvas texture too. I think the light should be a little more even to get rid of the harsh highlight. I would like to know how this effect was achieved. |
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02/10/2003 12:20:18 PM |
| Lovely! The gauzy quality is really powerful. Such an evocative image, could be interpreted as either sad or hide-and-seek-playfulness. |
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02/10/2003 02:48:48 AM |
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02/10/2003 01:40:35 AM |
| Wow! This is really interesting! I wonder how you did this. Great Waldo shot! |
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02/10/2003 12:50:42 AM |
| needs a tighter crop on top... I would like to play with the brightness and contrast a bit also, but I like the idea and set up |
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02/10/2003 12:27:39 AM |
| An interesting and captivating photo. Almost like something one would see in a movie. |
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02/10/2003 12:26:10 AM |
| this is awesome! more later! |
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