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02/23/2003 06:51:07 PM |
~ Critique Club Comment ~
Composition : Certainly an interesting perspective. I would have liked to see this with a few different rotations. My eye really wants to see one of the edges straight (top bottom or a side). But I like the effect you achieved here. I think the lack of an anchoring line might add to the dizzying effect.
Exposure / Lighting : As was pointed out already, it does seem a bit dark. While it works well as is for pure lines and geometry, I think a tad more brightness may have made it a stunning shot.
Focus : Focus is not an issue.
Post Processing : May have benefited from a touch more brightness.
Challenge / Wow : The challenge was certainly met here. A different rotation may (or may not) have helped give greater WoW. I feel strongly that a tad more brightness would have been an improvement. |
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02/16/2003 12:48:20 PM |
| This is nice... i love architectural designs and the perspective here is excellent. I believe the blue may be a bit oversaturated.. it seems a little uneven.. not sure if that is from a saturation or a level adjustment... excellent shot :) - setzler |
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02/16/2003 11:04:42 AM |
| Strong composition, but I think it's a bit dark. I would have liked this in black and white, maybe, with high contrast. The blue and black together are a bit confusing to look at. |
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02/15/2003 10:30:24 AM |
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02/13/2003 06:03:28 PM |
| Strong image! Very good perspective shot. Focus seems sharp. With just two colors, there's not alot I can comment on for color, but the contrast is very good. Interest - gets better with more viewing (really nice patterns) moderate to good. Score upgrade from 7 to 8 (congrats!) Swash |
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02/13/2003 03:58:03 PM |
| Would be great with a wild sunset behind it to |
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02/13/2003 10:34:40 AM |
| Good perspective and use of line to create your composition. |
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02/12/2003 08:01:30 PM |
| I love the pattern as much as the perspective |
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02/12/2003 08:34:29 AM |
| this is a really cool image ... i really like the abstractness - what is this exactly? |
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02/11/2003 07:42:35 PM |
| nice perspective. lots of great patterns. a bit dark, and appears maybe oversharpened. |
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02/11/2003 03:10:01 PM |
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02/11/2003 10:32:31 AM |
| This shot is very interesting. The center of the tower (the top) feels off center, but the contrast of blue and black makes for a great photograph. - xertion |
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02/10/2003 10:09:03 PM |
| Not sure what it is, but it makes me dizzy. Nice shot. |
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02/10/2003 06:54:22 PM |
| Very nice effect. I think it would be even more effective if one of the sides was parallel to the horizon. I love the tone of the sky. Jacko. |
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