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Challenge: Perspective (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-F707
Location: Kansas City, Mo
Date: Feb 4, 2003
Aperture: f5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/320
Galleries: Abstract, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Feb 7, 2003

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Statistics
Place: 27 out of 94
Avg (all users): 6.1827
Avg (commenters): 6.7500
Avg (participants): 6.3433
Avg (non-participants): 5.8919
Views since voting: 1184
Votes: 104
Comments: 14
Favorites: 0


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02/23/2003 06:51:07 PM
~ Critique Club Comment ~

Composition : Certainly an interesting perspective. I would have liked to see this with a few different rotations. My eye really wants to see one of the edges straight (top bottom or a side). But I like the effect you achieved here. I think the lack of an anchoring line might add to the dizzying effect.

Exposure / Lighting : As was pointed out already, it does seem a bit dark. While it works well as is for pure lines and geometry, I think a tad more brightness may have made it a stunning shot.

Focus : Focus is not an issue.

Post Processing : May have benefited from a touch more brightness.

Challenge / Wow : The challenge was certainly met here. A different rotation may (or may not) have helped give greater WoW. I feel strongly that a tad more brightness would have been an improvement.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/16/2003 12:48:20 PM
This is nice... i love architectural designs and the perspective here is excellent. I believe the blue may be a bit oversaturated.. it seems a little uneven.. not sure if that is from a saturation or a level adjustment... excellent shot :) - setzler
02/16/2003 11:04:42 AM
Strong composition, but I think it's a bit dark. I would have liked this in black and white, maybe, with high contrast. The blue and black together are a bit confusing to look at.
02/15/2003 10:30:24 AM
Very good and dramatic!
02/13/2003 06:03:28 PM
Strong image! Very good perspective shot. Focus seems sharp. With just two colors, there's not alot I can comment on for color, but the contrast is very good. Interest - gets better with more viewing (really nice patterns) moderate to good. Score upgrade from 7 to 8 (congrats!) Swash
02/13/2003 03:58:03 PM
Would be great with a wild sunset behind it to
02/13/2003 10:34:40 AM
Good perspective and use of line to create your composition.
02/12/2003 08:01:30 PM
I love the pattern as much as the perspective
02/12/2003 08:34:29 AM
this is a really cool image ... i really like the abstractness - what is this exactly?
02/11/2003 07:42:35 PM
nice perspective. lots of great patterns. a bit dark, and appears maybe oversharpened.
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02/11/2003 03:10:01 PM
Great shot!
02/11/2003 10:32:31 AM
This shot is very interesting. The center of the tower (the top) feels off center, but the contrast of blue and black makes for a great photograph. - xertion
02/10/2003 10:09:03 PM
Not sure what it is, but it makes me dizzy. Nice shot.
02/10/2003 06:54:22 PM
Very nice effect. I think it would be even more effective if one of the sides was parallel to the horizon. I love the tone of the sky. Jacko.
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