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Falling
Falling
hsteg


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Free Study 2018-04 (Standard Editing)
Camera: Fujifilm x-t10
Lens: Fujifilm XF 35mm F2 R WR
Location: Museum of Fine Arts, Boston
Date: Apr 7, 2018
Aperture: 11.0
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/30
Date Uploaded: Apr 30, 2018

Saw this shadow and waited for a person to step into the frame.

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Place: 18 out of 69
Avg (all users): 5.8974
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
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Avg (non-participants): 5.7273
Views since voting: 230
Views during voting: 68
Votes: 39
Comments: 4
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05/24/2018 10:00:12 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

The challenge was a free study so your entry was definitely on point. ;) I love the creativity shown here. My eye was drawn straight to that weird shadow and it definitely looks like a falling person. Nice use of leading lines to bring attention to the shadow. I also like that your live person is looking in the direction of the shadow ... although if someone was falling maybe he'd actually be looking the other way? But I digress. The geometric, repeated patterns bring interest and height to the picture that add to your "falling" concept. The colors and tone convey a touch of sadness and mystery that works well with your theme.

I do wish the man's face was more clear and that he had some sort of emotion showing (shock, sadness). I agree with previous comments regarding a need for context. I have to wonder what that blob the falling person is about to smack into actually is. Of course making the viewer think and look harder at an image is a tricky job. One that you accomplished quite well here.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/07/2018 04:09:06 PM
so they drop people now
05/07/2018 07:28:01 AM
ended up in the top spot in my voting. lots of interesting ambiguity here
05/06/2018 02:06:06 PM
Interesting, but .... need some context.


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