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Fresh from the Bakery
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Challenge: Bread II (Standard Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D800
Lens: Nikon AF-S NIKKOR 24-70mm f/2.8G ED
Location: Washington state
Date: Sep 6, 2018
Aperture: f/8.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 2 seconds
Date Uploaded: Sep 6, 2018

Sourdough, multi-grain, classic baguette, and rustic loaf. Hungry yet?

Window light with multiple rectangles of black foam core eliminating spill, one white foam core reflector to soften shadows, two images focused near and far for focus stacking, then minor tweaks.

2018-09-06-18.36_dpc

Statistics
Place: 4 out of 24
Avg (all users): 6.3704
Avg (commenters): 6.6667
Avg (participants): 6.4118
Avg (non-participants): 6.3514
Views since voting: 916
Views during voting: 97
Votes: 54
Comments: 7
Favorites: 0


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09/18/2018 11:33:42 PM
Congrats on the HM, Bob!
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09/18/2018 11:33:42 PM
Congrats on the HM, Bob!
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09/17/2018 09:33:15 PM
Bread looks yummy! Maybe a rustic background would of made this pop! Also Johanna was right, focus was slightly off on the bread.

Gave you a 6 but with a little extra oomph could’ve been more ;)

Thanks for the fave,
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/14/2018 06:15:24 PM
My favorite in this challenge.
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09/13/2018 09:30:38 PM
Focus on the bread is a bit soft, but yum!!!
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09/12/2018 08:08:56 AM
the bread looks lovely but there is too much black space for my taste. Maybe a more detailed shot or a bold crop might have helped?
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09/12/2018 12:18:57 AM
SO nearly there in my eyes, you have a grain bread, a baguette, a more rustic baguette and a loaf of hopefully white bread. Perfect positioning on that brown table cloth, but it is boring. Solid black background, that could have worked. You have a loaves of bread in a basket that has no charm on a brown table cloth. Imagine, in your mind, this exact setting, then out a golden side dish of curled butter, some weeping Camembert and the stark contrast of a triangle of blue cheese, giving you the colour, maybe some grapes or vibrant strawberry jam. Imagine yourself in a French countryside, surrounded by weeping willows and a blue tranquil stream. Adding a boost of golden colour to the leavers on the table cloth, or boosting up the contrast or structor on the wicker basket. Bring out the grain in the loaves and basket in colour contrast. I am picturing myself in France right now. And isnt that what is supposed to be about. Having a picture that takes you places, out of your mundane life. Vote later for this,
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