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03/20/2003 11:02:20 AM |
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02/23/2003 12:27:55 PM |
Thanks to all who commented. Your comments are appreciated. For those of you who did not like my props or the shadows - the shadows are deliberate. While it wasn't my intention, I think the "distracting" shadow served a purpose in making my Waldo "not so obvious." I was surprised that some voters had difficulty locating my Waldo.
The mason jar is an antique collectible, and highly desirable in the area where I live. Mason jars of this type are often used as flower vases for country decor (or so I thought).
To each his own, I guess, but I am pleased with how well the photo performed in this challenge.
Message edited by author 2003-02-23 12:29:40. |
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02/23/2003 08:15:49 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Good concept for Where's Waldo. I think the challenge on the whole produced some interesting photos. This is no exception. There are 2 things about this photo that I don't like, and all the rest I like. The first is your "vase," and the doily looks like a napkin. The second is the dominance of the shadows in the pic. The colors I think are great, the double exposure thing is cool, the framing is nice. The biggest thing that I can't get around are the darn shadows.
Technical - Well done. My wife has tried doing stuff with the multiple exposure feature on her 602 with not much success. This was well done and well thought out.
Overall - A little of the finishing touches added to this and you'd really have something. This is a well executed picture, just the setup might've been better served with some better props and less shadows. Good job Mcrael, keep up the good work. - Inspzil |
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02/17/2003 01:51:30 AM |
| please do give that tutorial submission. :) |
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02/16/2003 10:31:07 PM |
| This is really neat, I'll be glad to see how you did it. Great job. A bit too much on the shadows but I wonder if that was necessary. |
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02/15/2003 10:34:25 PM |
| Great job of hiding Waldo. and Beautiful photo. But come on, a mason jar. Didn't you have anything else to put the flowers in? The are exquisite flowers and deserve to be shown off to the fullest in a beautiful vase. A nice vace would hve helped so much. Details, details. they can make or break you. This is probably the 2nd or 3rd best job of hiding Waldo of the challenge but the composition lacks badly. Need to spend more time on the overall composition the next time. This had the potential of being #1. |
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02/15/2003 08:14:45 PM |
| Your picture is one of my top picks this week. You definitley satisfy all aspects of the theme in a well taken photo. Great job. |
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02/14/2003 04:52:32 PM |
| Van Gogh's Sunflowers, ok. Meeting the challenge? I don't see a person, so no. OK - is it the eye in the flower? |
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02/14/2003 07:25:06 AM |
| Very cool effect! Curious to see how it was done. Great Job! One of my favorites for this challenge. |
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02/13/2003 10:43:42 PM |
| Nicely hidden. I'd like to know how you did this! |
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02/13/2003 01:32:56 PM |
| This is one of my favorites so far. A lovely photograph that meets the challenge in a unique way. I especially love the piece of material under the vase that ties it all together and the high-contrast feel this has. |
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02/13/2003 10:41:07 AM |
| I love the creamy background. |
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02/12/2003 08:05:06 PM |
| That's an interesting effect, I'm curious as to how you achieved it. The shadows a bit distracting here, and I'd say the doily isn't necessary, and detracts. Still, neat work with the face. |
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02/12/2003 04:05:28 PM |
ok now i see !!!!!!!!!!!!! at first it looked like just flowers to me, and i didnt think you met the challenge . I had to look a very long time to see the face in the flower,
I didnt see it at first, but after i saw it , this is awsome. (You are just to good.) 10 |
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02/12/2003 12:13:28 AM |
| Pretty cool. How'd you do that!?? |
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02/11/2003 07:55:39 PM |
| Well damn, that's kind of creepy. But nice shot, I like the reflection of the water in the shadow. |
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02/11/2003 06:26:38 PM |
| Very interesting effect. Makes me wonder how it was done, I will try to remember to read the notes on this one after the challenge. Nice color, focus, composition. The jar, doilie and dual tone background seem clumsy together, esp. the jar and the doilie. On the other hand, the effect with the face is just too wonderful to mark this down too much. 8 Swash |
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02/11/2003 04:07:56 PM |
| where is the hidden person? oh, now i see this face! changing my score, too! |
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02/11/2003 12:54:28 PM |
| You sure met the challenge here. I like it, the flowers are not centred, the border matches and most of all you have a most original submission here. I am very keen to know how you managed it. |
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02/11/2003 10:18:53 AM |
| Absolute fantastic job of hiding Waldo, however, I think the overall staging of the flowers is a bit weak to meet the full potential of the photograph. I think that if you did a better job of controlling the environment, this would have been a 10. e.g. black background, that didn't show a shadow, removed the white cheesecloth from underneath the vase, and had the water line filled to the top. Conclusion, there are too many distractions to warrant a 10, but the flowers by themselves are great. |
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02/11/2003 08:40:23 AM |
| Wow, how did you do this without editing??? Meets the challenge! |
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02/11/2003 07:26:24 AM |
| Very clever, is that a mirror stuck to the flower? |
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02/11/2003 12:14:11 AM |
| Excellent shot. I hope you tell us how you did it after the voting. |
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02/10/2003 04:31:07 PM |
| Ooooh, I really had to study this to see what you were getting at. The disclaimer ("This image has been validated by the administrators") made it all the more compelling and cryptic. There's that face! Interesting effect! |
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02/10/2003 03:41:20 PM |
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02/10/2003 02:39:18 PM |
Huh? Just a stupid flower pic from the cliché challenge? Hmm, reflection in the glass? No.
Shadow effect? No.
Just when I was about to give up I spot the face in the flower. :)
Wonder how you did this, good that there is an admin note on it.
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