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I am aware of the damp souls of housemaids
I am aware of the damp souls of housemaids

Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: The Imagery of T.S.Eliot (Extended Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Nikon D750
Lens: Nikon AF-S Nikkor 28-300mm f3.5-5.6G ED VR
Location: Huntington Beach, CA
Date: Feb 16, 2020
Date Uploaded: Feb 18, 2020

Morning at the Window
THEY are rattling breakfast plates in basement kitchens,
And along the trampled edges of the street
I am aware of the damp souls of housemaids
Sprouting despondently at area gates.

The brown waves of fog toss up to me
Twisted faces from the bottom of the street,
And tear from a passer-by with muddy skirts
An aimless smile that hovers in the air
And vanishes along the level of the roofs.

Place: 26 out of 34
Avg (all users): 5.4250
Avg (participants): 5.4762
Avg (non-participants): 5.3684
Views since voting: 60
Views during voting: 98
Votes: 40
Comments: 2
Favorites: 0

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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/01/2020 09:33:01 PM
I love that you caught her tying the apron. I think it would have more impact with the title if you only had her in the shot instead of both of them.
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02/24/2020 10:19:53 AM
Great find!!
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