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02/23/2003 09:23:04 PM |
Color is good, but would be a better photo if the printed words were in focus. Also crop off that black spot in the top left corner. |
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02/21/2003 08:22:51 AM |
Normally I wouldn't like "fuzzy" images, but here it works. I think you could have improved it by cropping off the dark in the top left corner, and I'm not sure that the white letter in the top right is helping either. |
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02/20/2003 08:43:39 PM |
Out of focus, too grainy, poor lighting. |
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02/20/2003 05:19:30 PM |
yep...that's definitely yellow. a little too blurry, though. |
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02/20/2003 08:20:05 AM |
Interseting concept, needs better lighting and better focus. |
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02/19/2003 09:54:28 PM |
Is this a joke? It's probably the worst picture I've ever seen! |
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02/18/2003 06:17:53 PM |
You have lots of yellow, challenge met. Focus seems WAY off, to the extent that I want to ask, was this on purpose? I am open to PM's, so feel free to explain if you would like to, even during the challenge week. I'm having a hard time offering positive comments, bear with me. Even the exposure seems less than even handed, did you use a flash? (centered on the right side of your camera?) The best I can go is a 4, sorry. Swash |
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02/18/2003 11:29:41 AM |
Out of focus, not original, and overexposed. |
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02/18/2003 10:52:39 AM |
This photo is out of focus. It needs something more as well. It seems a bit boring. Nice idea though. |
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02/18/2003 06:39:43 AM |
You met the challenge with the color here although the Kodak part is out of focus. DId you do this on purpose for the effect? I would have cropped out the letter "P" in the upper righthand corner and not have put the word "Kodak" so far into the top left hand corner. |
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02/18/2003 01:08:30 AM |
interesting image. i like the blurred effect with the letters. good job |
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02/17/2003 08:23:42 PM |
Why the blurred text? Is this deliberate or a defect/limitation of the camera. The composition is ok, however there is a little bit of black on the leftmost top edge which I would have cropped out. |
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02/17/2003 06:58:15 PM |
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02/17/2003 06:44:37 PM |
I can only assume that you aren't taking this too seriously...? Sorry... |
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02/17/2003 02:07:53 PM |
I don't believe that the lack of focus is strengthening this photo.. - setzler |
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02/17/2003 11:40:20 AM |
Wish I could rate it higher. I LOVE the concept, the yellow is fine, but it disturbs me to see the Great Yellow Father's logo out of focus. If it was intentional, I do apologise. |
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02/17/2003 02:49:33 AM |
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