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12/03/2004 07:28:51 AM |
| while i like the colors and general composition, in images as this, you would want the reflections to lend to the image, not take away from it. here, the reflections, especially of the light source, are not adding to the image. [if you want to see a great example of a reflection adding to an image, check out coley's everyday objects entry...] |
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12/03/2004 05:04:36 AM |
| as with the lamp, try the unsharp mask trick, may prove to effect the contrast and focus/haze at the same time if you are looking for that type of a change in this image. |
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12/03/2004 03:41:25 AM |
This is definately well composed, but the focus is much too soft, bumping the contrast and saturation would definately help this image - I'd try sharpening it quite a lot too, it might be effective with a high contrast and maybe even a bit of grain.
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12/03/2004 02:58:01 AM |
I like this but I feel your tonal levels could go darker and would give the image more impact
Overall image very nice and arty |
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