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06/23/2004 03:12:24 PM |
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06/19/2003 08:06:42 PM |
Kiwiness,
Ya' got ripped!!! People just don't appreciate how hard it is to incorporate clothes pins into a photograph.
I like yours better than mine.
Did you ever figure out who stole your cheese? Parts of it seem to be missing ;o)
Bob
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05/16/2003 11:12:12 PM |
My clothes pin and zippers are doing about the same score that you have on this one :o)
Bob
Message edited by author 2003-05-16 23:12:23. |
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03/02/2003 09:12:47 PM |
Critique Club
Composition-Content
Now this is a picture which I think deserved to do much better! Your idea is very original and you executed it well. Composition is great, with the cheese lined up across the picture. It fits the challenge perfectly but in a unique and humourous way.
Background
Perhaps the background could be a bit darker, boosting the shadow channel would have created a darker background.
Technical
Lighting looks great, perhaps slightly brighter would have been good, this could have been adjusted in post processing. Focus looks a little soft, but your aperture is not the reason....? Perhaps a tiny bit more sharpening would have helped.
My Opinion
Great, original shot! I agree with the one comment that a different colour string would have helped it stand out against the background. Excellent shot which should have scored higher IMO! Good Luck in the next challenge. |
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02/24/2003 01:14:04 PM |
| This was in my top three. Not only was it yellow?unless I'm colorblind (which I am!)?it says something to me. Unlike the three winners, whose photos are good, this one said something beyond yellow. I still say bravo! |
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02/23/2003 10:28:21 PM |
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02/23/2003 10:15:32 PM |
| This photo is engaging and intriguing to me because of the patterns created and then upset at the left. The subtle shades of different yellows are also engaging. A subtle and well composed photo that says way more than "yellow." Nice work. |
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02/23/2003 03:52:39 PM |
| Great idea and well executed. Fits the brief well too. |
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02/23/2003 11:53:15 AM |
| Very cute - you definitely have an original here! |
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02/22/2003 07:24:36 PM |
| lol. I like this. Very creative and funny. Very nice shot! 9 |
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02/20/2003 06:07:11 AM |
| great idea, nice focus and clarity .. and good choice of cheese |
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02/20/2003 01:18:28 AM |
| contrast needs adjusting so the black background is washed out and all you see is black negative space.... needs sharper focus too... |
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02/19/2003 11:19:35 AM |
| Lighting/crop/composition are all great, plus I see it is an original idea. I like it. |
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02/18/2003 10:05:06 AM |
| Cute idea. I like the way that the patterns in the cheese create some interest and design in the photo. Good job. |
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02/17/2003 09:58:05 PM |
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02/17/2003 07:11:14 PM |
| Hooting with laughter....love this. What a brain you have. |
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02/17/2003 03:23:22 PM |
| Funny idea! IMHO it could be better with a non black line. Perhaps white, or yellow too. The cheese slices are looking a little bit like hovering in the air :-) |
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02/17/2003 01:39:03 AM |
| humor and a well executed photo. well done! |
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02/17/2003 12:58:12 AM |
| I really like this shot. I am not sure why. Good luck. |
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