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04/26/2005 06:41:17 PM |
It seems a little dark to me. Also the shadow from your flash doesn't help. The background could be improved as well.
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02/17/2005 09:20:43 AM |
Technically, I think that this could probably be improved. It's a little dark everyplace except the belt, the composition could be opened up a bit more I think, and the focus is a little soft on the face. That being said, I think this shot was vastly underrated! The expression you've captured and the idea both merit at the very least a 5. I didn't vote in this challenge, but I would have given you a 5 or 6.
I think it's one of the few shots where the title really helps as well. Anytime you put a smile on my face (which this one did), it has accomplished at least reaching the viewer. |
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12/11/2004 11:58:48 PM |
| hehe, aww, kick some ass honey |
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12/11/2004 08:04:02 PM |
| I think the crop is too tight for the action implied here - give her a little more room for the punch. |
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12/09/2004 11:18:03 AM |
| I like the title and the selective desaturation. I think it might be improved with a better background and sharper focus, especailly on the face. Even tho the yellow belt is the primary subject, I think we tend to want faces in focus. :) Hope this is helpful feedback. |
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12/09/2004 10:06:28 AM |
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12/08/2004 05:48:59 PM |
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