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02/26/2003 11:16:08 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB
This is a very interesting shot!
TECHNICAL: Your depth of field may be a bit too narrow. My eyes want to read the rest of the spine, making it hard to focus. I also think angling the book just a little more would have eliminated the dead space to the right.
SUBJECT: Very original! Great idea! Towards the bottom of the photo, there is some light that looks like the edge of the table where the book is??? You might want to crop this out.
LIGHTING: Maybe a tiny bit harsh. The yellow is a bit glaring, but not bad.
OVERALL: This is really an interesting shot that met the challenge perfectly.
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02/22/2003 06:24:16 AM |
| I very much like the DOF here. |
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02/21/2003 01:23:52 PM |
| I think the depth of field should be deeper here. |
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02/21/2003 10:32:47 AM |
| Narrow DoF is perhaps just a little *too* narrow here. And why so much neg space on the right? 7 - floyd |
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02/21/2003 03:06:52 AM |
| Amazing, I just love this picture.... A perfect 10 for me (subman) The focus and fade towards black... |
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02/18/2003 12:36:45 AM |
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02/17/2003 09:58:18 PM |
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02/17/2003 07:08:09 PM |
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