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02/26/2003 11:05:48 AM |
Critique CLub Comments
Very effective image, that also meets the challenge right one! I love the simpicitiy of this composition. The diagonal line works beautifully and the use of negative space works well.
I like the yellow border, but I definetly agree that the yellow line from the marker should touch the border, and a little more space left at the bottom of the marker, would have made the image better.
As it is, it is still a wonderful picture. Good work! I like this very much.
Regards,
Grayce |
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02/23/2003 10:25:27 PM |
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02/22/2003 10:17:30 PM |
| Lose the border, I think this works without it. At least connect the border with the line you drew with the highlighter to make it look like one line, if you have the opportunity. |
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02/22/2003 07:38:50 PM |
| nice. like how the marker line is the same thickness as the border and looks like it drew it. Good use of design principles. 5 |
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02/22/2003 06:18:06 AM |
| Nice and simple. I like it, and the border looks good with the diagonal line you've drawn. |
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02/19/2003 11:37:04 PM |
| Pretty cool. I even like the yellow border. Might have left some more room around the bottom of the marker. |
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02/17/2003 10:21:41 PM |
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02/17/2003 06:15:47 PM |
| Well done............so simple, so cool. |
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02/17/2003 02:09:09 PM |
| original, clear, good boarder, i like this 10 |
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02/17/2003 11:04:04 AM |
| I like this, but I can't help wondering what it would look like with the pen-line running into the border, or the border drawn using the pen. |
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02/17/2003 01:58:09 AM |
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02/17/2003 01:34:05 AM |
| I find the border a little distracting, but othewise, nice colors. |
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02/17/2003 12:21:34 AM |
| Excellent! I personally would have started the boarder where the highlight picked up, creating the visual effect that the boarder was also highlighted. |
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