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12/14/2004 11:02:15 PM |
I like this one a lot. One of my favorites. |
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12/13/2004 09:40:37 PM |
its yellow!, maybe white paper would have added some contrast.
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12/13/2004 01:49:38 PM |
Nice composition. Like the contrast by adding the lone red paperclip. Solid entry. |
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12/13/2004 09:46:16 AM |
Good closeup, DOF, and use of color. Nice shot. |
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12/12/2004 11:29:37 AM |
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12/11/2004 11:31:55 AM |
Great idea, but the red is what I notice. The yellow becomes the background. 5 |
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12/10/2004 05:31:33 PM |
This image just simply appeals to me. I love yellow, and the amount of content and "busy-ness" is just right in my opinion. The composition is well done, and the red accent perfectly placed. There is almost a soft yellow "glow" throughout the image that I think really works. |
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12/09/2004 06:28:06 PM |
Nice touch throwing in the red paper clip and the darker yellow pencil. I turned the brightness of my monitor down to 25% and the pen top is still a little too bright. I would suggest shooting at a number of exposure settings and using levels adjustments to reduce glare, especially for bright yellow. Even the surface of the lined pad is wiped out by glare in the foreground center. A 7. |
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12/08/2004 09:17:56 PM |
Nice foto, although maybe just a bit less busy may have made a stronger impact. |
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12/08/2004 09:00:41 PM |
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12/08/2004 02:03:34 PM |
Nice pic .. looks fresh .. 8 |
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12/08/2004 10:22:47 AM |
the red paper clip stands out the most from all the yellow blending together |
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12/08/2004 01:26:47 AM |
I like this. Very nice. Great use of the red paperclip as a foil. The only flaw is the washed out lines in the paper from the flash or light source. Great idea and excellent composition. You have the eye of an artist. How refreshing. |
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