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12/19/2004 09:32:51 PM |
Returning for comments:
I love it, broken but still working. Nice colors. bumping up. |
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12/15/2004 06:06:57 PM |
| your cropping - being so close to the torch one the left, and yet leaving that space to the right, almost implies there should be something to the left of frame that I can't see. The image though, feels contrived, and yet doesn't have that sense of control of environment that a set-up shot needs to make impact. There's a sense of not quite being in focus, not quite perfect detail and sharpness, that doesn't suit the simplicitty of the scene to my mind. Did you use a tripod for this? It looks like its handheld, and has that slight suggestion of motion blur that goes with that. |
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12/14/2004 10:01:09 PM |
I can't quite tell what this is... I can see a chip of class, but what's the main object?
Perhaps some curve work to increase brightness/contrast would make this more striking. |
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12/14/2004 03:39:34 AM |
Composition: 6
Technical: 3, dark
Appeal: 2, can't tell what it is...
Challenge: 3, ...but I can tell it's broken! ;-)
Overall Score: 3 (weighted) |
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12/13/2004 01:41:31 AM |
| Would like to see the broken piece better illuminated |
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