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02/26/2003 11:21:16 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB
This photo is absolutely breathtaking, making it very hard to critique!
CHALLENGE: For rhythm, this photo may be a bit busy. There are so many examples of rhythm here that you might want to focus on just one thing, like the pattern in that amazing ceiling.
TECHNICAL: I think your camera was set perfectly. There is a light at the bottom of the photo, and I can't decide if that's your flash reflection or someone elses? This is probably something you'll want to edit later.
POST CHALLENGE SUGGESTIONS: I would stongly considered cropping out the bottom of this piece. The eyes are automatically drawn to that amazing ceiling and everything else adds an element of clutter. Don't get me wrong, this is an absolutely GORGEOUS print that deserved a high score! |
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02/22/2003 06:56:06 PM |
| This is beautiful architecture.. I'm not sure I like the immediate foreground as much as the ceiling work though... nice shot :) - setzler |
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02/22/2003 07:07:17 AM |
| Very nice photo indeed. Love the patterns in the ceiling! |
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02/20/2003 04:31:01 PM |
| Great shot, love the warm colors, composition, clarity and lighting. 10 |
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02/18/2003 12:54:49 PM |
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02/17/2003 04:11:41 PM |
| the bottom of this photo with the match sticks could have been eliminated by cropping to keep the viewers attention on the cieling.. nice exposure though. |
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02/17/2003 02:40:01 PM |
| Very nice image. Good compositon and juxtaposition of elements. |
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02/17/2003 10:23:03 AM |
| You found a fine subject and captured light well. |
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02/17/2003 09:45:58 AM |
| The bottom quarter of this one really distracts from the great repitition and rhythm of the arches. |
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