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02/26/2003 10:51:09 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB
WOW! Okay, I have been staring at this for quite some time, and frankly, I LOVE this photo. It's absolutely gorgeous.
LIGHTING: Beautiful. The only nit-picky critique I have is that the focus falls on the windows at the end which seem like they should have more to them, because they are so bright. Obviously, this couldn't be corrected with the sunlight, but I would like to see more lighting on the books.
CHALLENGE: Definitely met. Wonderful rhythmic look. Maybe a bit "choppy" - I actually think this would have been perfect for "leading lines"
TECHNICAL: I see no problems at all with your settings
OVERALL: I absolutely love this, so please don't think of this as a short critique. It's hard to critique something that is near perfect. Adjust the lighting on the windows (now that you can edit) and you have yourself a treasure! |
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02/23/2003 07:57:54 PM |
| One of my favorites of the week! Very nice. It's a shame that the window is so bright... otherwise this would be a 10. |
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02/23/2003 09:32:14 AM |
| Nice rythms and good contrast, too bad for the two faint windows(?) that add depth where it is not needed. 9 |
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02/23/2003 12:42:26 AM |
| Good job of achieving overall dof. |
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02/22/2003 07:04:40 AM |
| This is really good, nice choice with b&w, and great symmetrical composition. 10 |
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02/20/2003 11:21:50 PM |
| Great shot, B and W was a perfect choice here. Great job of hitting the contrast on a tough shot. |
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02/19/2003 11:23:49 AM |
| This is an excellent black and white... I love the leading lines up to the bright window... great shot :) - setzler |
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02/18/2003 11:36:11 AM |
| this room looks familiar, for me it is an attic in the gem theater in new richmond wi, where an elderly priest had a library of old latin liturgical volumes....... also it reminds me of the library in Super Mario 64. Nice library shot..... i love it in b & w. |
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02/18/2003 09:02:47 AM |
| This is a beautiful photo. |
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02/17/2003 02:28:49 PM |
| Good. Well exposed, except for the blown out window...can't help that, I guess. I love the subject...shelves of books, and wood floors...love it. |
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02/17/2003 01:11:18 AM |
| this is an amazing photo. i love the emptyness of the shot, very well executed. |
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