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03/05/2003 04:55:16 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB
Challenge: Definitely meets the challenge. I think it would have been a little more compelling with a tear or maybe more jagged writing. Your writing looks so beautiful and "happy", not desperate. (that's a backwards compliment)
Technique: I love the angle and the cropping. The corner at the top is cropped, but the bottom is not, so it is a bit too off-centered. The black and white finish is great. This is a little blurry, which probably happened during resizing. You might want to sharpen your image before submitting next time.
Overall: A creative and good approach to this challenge. I'm sure many of us can relate to the despair of losing trust in a loved one. Thanks for sharing this wonderful image with all of us! |
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02/28/2003 10:39:11 PM |
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02/27/2003 08:47:20 PM |
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02/27/2003 12:11:31 AM |
| It's blurry. Use unsharp mask! |
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02/26/2003 10:29:38 PM |
| Read I Corinthians chapter 13 to get a true definition of love straight from the author of love! |
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02/25/2003 05:06:05 AM |
| Excellent idea I love it! You have met the challenge head on with this image. At first I thought you had both his and her rings there but I see they are the same size so they must be both hers. I mean it wouldn't have made sense if his ring had also been there. Great composition, the angles are very harmonizing. Congratulations. |
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02/25/2003 03:34:01 AM |
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02/25/2003 02:15:55 AM |
| Not good focus. Everything else was pretty good. |
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02/24/2003 05:07:39 PM |
| unfortunately i can relate to this and its hit home. but not for the trust (for another guy). Turned out for the better! |
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02/24/2003 04:54:25 PM |
| Oh, that hurts. nice black and white. well done |
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02/24/2003 02:34:34 PM |
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02/24/2003 09:23:59 AM |
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