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12/28/2004 10:52:23 PM |
This comment comes courtesy of the Critique Club :)
The first thing that strikes me here about this image is that it is full of motion. It definitely depicts 'Wind' well. Where it falls short, however, is some of its technical aspects. Color rendition could have been a little better - possibly editing this in some kind of graphics program, or exposing a little differently at the time of the shot (the main thing is that it seems a little dark - the whites on the US flag aren't quite as white as they could be in this image).
Other small things - the branches in the foreground are slightly distracting (and the sign in the background) - especially due to their static nature. This could be a great shot if you eliminated some of the distracting elements and possibly brought the exposure level up a notch or two. |
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12/17/2004 03:00:22 AM |
| Nice idea, but this photo is a bit too dark, the angle is a bit awkward also. |
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12/16/2004 12:22:10 AM |
| Soft focus is too distracting and the shot is too busy. 4. |
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12/16/2004 12:21:24 AM |
| Good job of capturing the movement of the flags. I would have liked an angle that doesn't show the text however. |
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12/15/2004 09:59:28 PM |
| too dark lower right corner is cropped and hurts the composition |
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12/15/2004 12:48:25 PM |
| Lack of originality IMHO. |
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12/15/2004 10:49:08 AM |
| Composition: 6, Technical: 6, Appeal: 4, Challenge: 8, Overall Calculated Average Score: 6 |
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12/15/2004 03:42:27 AM |
| slightly improved color rendition could help this image greatly, as well as a possible slight move to disclude the brances on the left. |
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