Dang. My comment didn't make it through. Must be something wrong with my keyboard.
Fascinating in twenty-three ways, though I haven't the freedom to enumerate them at the moment. Okay, here are a few : mood, light, textures, seemingly arbitrary hints, quirky balance, fleeting glimpse of everyday wonder, lines, lines, lines, timelessness, which collides with the challenge injunction, but so what, wondrous tone, the jettisoning of fastidious focus, dreaminess (as noted), what the h-e-double hockey sticks is going on?, etc.. But my original comment was about two short sentences.
Ratings need not apply. You're well along a marvelous journey.
Talked myself up two cherries to ten. |