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01/10/2005 07:40:01 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
Composition: The composition of the photograph is very interesting, if I squint my eyes I can almost make out letters in the shadows of the paper clips. I have read some of your previous comments and have to agree that a diagonal composition would have strengthened the photo. Also by cropping out the dark corners you would have led the viewers eye more clearly to the subject.
Colors:You soft muted colors are very pleasing to the eye, much like a late afternoon shot would.
Lighting:The direction of your lightening lead to the great shadows, and prevents this from being a flat photograph. I like the interplay of light with the paper clips, very interesting
Overall: Overall this is a nice picture but not overly interesting. It does not hold my interest for too long. A tighter crop would help by removing too much empty space. Good luck in subsequent challenges.
Barbara
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01/03/2005 11:06:50 PM |
| Interesting. Nice creative concept. I like the dramatic shadows. I'm thinking though that maybe applying the rule of thirds or placing on a diagonal line would make for a stronger composition? |
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01/03/2005 07:04:10 PM |
not sure if its within the challenge but its a great idea
love the shadowplay and the background (wich i a cant really figure out) |
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01/03/2005 04:58:27 PM |
| genius design... what's it on, a pregnant belly? 7 |
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12/31/2004 08:32:46 PM |
| Interesting composition! Unfortunately the image is a bit noisy and lacking in sharpness. I like the angle of the lighting, it's interesting, but I'd prefer if the image were a little bit brighter. |
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12/31/2004 08:02:40 PM |
| good picture, but do not understand what it has to do with mechanics |
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12/30/2004 11:53:04 PM |
| The subject is interesting, but the photo isn't crisp enough for me. The black in the corners (round table?) is distracting too. I like the shadows of the paperclips, but this definitely needs better cropping. Lighting is kinda odd too, but to create the shadows I can sort of understand how the bottom left hand corner could get overexposed. Anyway, it meets the challenge and it's a good try so I'm going with a 5. |
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12/29/2004 09:42:26 PM |
| That's an really great idea. A beautiful shot too. |
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12/29/2004 09:30:39 AM |
| interesting and surrealistic |
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12/29/2004 08:28:03 AM |
| Not sure it fits the subject. |
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