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01/10/2005 01:34:16 PM |
"This is not really avery interesting photograph"-yep
"It's also very grainy; was this a desired effect or were you shooting in low-fidelity mode?"-bad noise got worce after i downsized(didn't bother to get ridd of it.
"The scallops on the top edge are very odd"- u answered that 1-"artefact created by the rendering of the diagonal line at a low resolution"
i just wanted to submitt i jhould've tride hareder prob. but i'll leave the ribbon taking too bradP or some1 who can shoot studio. |
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01/09/2005 02:53:00 AM |
*** CRITIQUE CLUB COMMENTS ***
This is not really avery interesting photograph, to me, and I think you've acknowledged that yourself in your own comments. The lighting is quite decent, very tactile; that's about the only positive I can come up with.
The cropping is way too tight, especially on the right. Give it a little more room to breathe. It's also very grainy; was this a desired effect or were you shooting in low-fidelity mode? The scallops on the top edge are very odd. Are they actually there, or is this an artefact created by the rendering of the diagonal line at a low resolution?
Robt.
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12/31/2004 04:57:03 PM |
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12/31/2004 10:47:56 AM |
Clever title.
I like the simplicity of the shot in that the background and surface the tape is on don't distract from the tape itself. |
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12/30/2004 10:49:24 PM |
I know what you're trying to portray here, but it's (to be brutally honest) dull and not very interesting. A different background, not so boring crop, interesting lighting, funny label on the tape and it might work better...
TC |
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12/29/2004 03:38:37 PM |
technicalwise it may not be perfect but its a great idea and shot suffient to make it work
well done |
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12/29/2004 12:53:43 PM |
| Too noisy for my taste. Lightning would be better if achieved a more uniform one. |
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12/29/2004 10:14:08 AM |
| This photo says to me that I need a entry for the "Hidden Faces" challenge and its a last minute photo. |
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12/28/2004 08:05:39 PM |
| Crisp and sharp. A few jaggies along the upper edge. I think the blue foreground gives it a little depth against the black background. |
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