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03/15/2003 10:37:21 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
Though the horizontal placement of eggs gives the picture a solid, stable feeling, it also makes it kinda static. There is nothing to lead the eyes through the picture; they just go to the white egg and stop. I think a tighter crop to remove the white at the top and bottom, or to even it up would have been effective, or arranging the eggs differently, maybe in a cluster instead of rows.
TECHNIQUE
It seems slightly overblown on the white. Maybe a diffuser, or something like a tissue or paper towel (make sure it doesn't ignite!) over your primary light source would help.
OVERALL EFFECT
I think this is a potentially awesome shot. The white adn brown provides a neat contrast, and it does meet the challenge.
Best wishes in the future.
karmat
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03/08/2003 01:50:16 PM |
| Wonderful idea, and the contrast between the brown and white works well. The lighting is appropriate, too. The white egg seems out of focus, when I think that's the one you really want in focus. |
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03/05/2003 02:08:54 PM |
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03/03/2003 10:49:32 PM |
| picture ended up a litle noisy, not sure from USM or just getting it to size for the challenge. white egg has too bright of light on it, but that is a tough one with white and dark eggs |
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