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01/04/2005 01:17:36 PM |
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01/03/2005 01:15:07 PM |
very good idea.
the BG is too close to the subject and creates a shadow which seems to double the image gives the impression of lack of focus and makes me go crosseyed. crop a tad too tight. |
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01/03/2005 10:20:47 AM |
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01/02/2005 10:07:23 PM |
| The composition is rather boring,with a dull, slightly reflective background |
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01/01/2005 05:04:22 AM |
| too much bidimensional... |
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12/30/2004 11:23:27 PM |
| It's a strong, even brutalist view of the tool, but its potential is betrayed by the lighting and the framing. The defined vertical of the bit thru the handle would be better placed another 15-20% to the right, I think. And the lighting could be worked with to make it sing a lot more. |
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12/30/2004 08:25:42 PM |
Composition: 4, The brace looks out of place, boring a hole in a board next to the wall.
Technical: 4, Subject could be moved away from wall to disperse the strong shadow caused by your flash.
Appeal: 3, I would have tried to make a story out of this someway, maybe by adding a worker. Hell I don't know but it needs something to make it pop.
Challenge: 9
Overall Calculated Average Score: 5 |
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12/29/2004 05:12:16 AM |
| lighting could do with some work. Theres a pretty bad flash shadow but the main issue is the lighting is so flat. This might have been better using natural light from a window with an old guy bent over using the tools |
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