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03/10/2003 04:40:52 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Grayce...
This is an excellent composition. Congrats on a great score also :)
The leading lines in this photo seem to bring my eye to a focal point near the center of the photo at the intersection of the walkways... The only issue that I have with this particular photo is that the leading lines don't really lead me to a 'subject' of the photo. The subject seems to be the architecture moreso than the intersection of the walkway. Even though the leading lines point to this intersection, my eyes are still drawn to the concrete pillars... they are overpowering the focal point of the leading lines....
Excellent photo :) Keep up the great work :)
John Setzler
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03/10/2003 12:00:23 AM |
| Amazing architecture! Very pretty shot. |
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03/09/2003 02:44:32 AM |
| The extra effort in taking this photo is only too obvious! The results are marvelous! This image is well balanced and the exposure is excellent! Great job! IMHO |
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03/07/2003 08:05:41 AM |
| Great shot! My top of the week! The duo tone hasn't been exagerated and the light and dark tones are well balanced. Your cropping is perfect! Theme well respected! |
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03/06/2003 11:46:04 PM |
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03/06/2003 07:56:37 AM |
| great perspective! has a bit grainy touch with the kind of pinkish cast that I am not that fond of, but it makes it appear even more open for some reason |
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03/05/2003 05:08:20 PM |
| this is a great shot showing leading lines .. you have the walkway going to the center and the railings bringing your eye to the center too .. the tones are great too! |
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03/05/2003 01:43:24 PM |
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03/05/2003 12:16:44 PM |
| Where is the subject? I like the shot and the color tones. |
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03/04/2003 11:20:00 PM |
| beautiful! the sepia tone works well. good work! |
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03/04/2003 04:40:47 PM |
| One of my favourites this week. Great composition. Perfect focus and the sepia tone is perfect.. I had probably made it a little darker but that´s just me. Overall a very interesting shot that gets high score from me. Well done and good luck. |
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03/03/2003 11:24:54 PM |
| God damn that's cool... Even tho it doesn't really lead to a subject, the dark "hole" in the middle of the pic is really the subject I think. My eyes just wander in and out on this one. Excellent = 10. |
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03/03/2003 04:23:36 PM |
| excellent architectural shot.. the perspective is nice.. -- setzler |
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03/03/2003 02:08:02 PM |
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03/03/2003 10:23:45 AM |
| The graininess adds to this shot! I like the lines and how they draw the eye to jogger and bench in the middle. Great job! In my top 10 this week. |
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03/03/2003 09:15:53 AM |
| Excellent shot. Perfect leading lines photo. 10. |
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