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03/13/2003 05:44:56 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
First impression is that this meets the challenge and is a very good photo. I have to say that there might be too many lines. This is still a fine photo though. There isn't really much else for me to add. You took a good photo and met the challenge. Keep it up. |
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03/08/2003 02:07:47 PM |
| I like this a lot - although I'd like the barrels down and left a touch in the frame. |
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03/07/2003 01:48:35 AM |
| Excellent design and very dramatic contrasts |
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03/06/2003 11:24:46 PM |
| good idea, and lighting, but bring the cans closer in so we get a better view of the as the main subject... so far in the corner the lines hold more subject power than they should |
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03/06/2003 11:16:29 PM |
| Simple yet effective, I think this is what the challenge was looking for! Very nice job. |
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03/06/2003 07:59:29 AM |
| nice lighting that progressivlely darkens towards the top left, but leaves the TX barrels lit. |
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03/05/2003 12:11:27 PM |
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03/05/2003 12:52:43 AM |
| Nice exposure. The lines are pretty busy and there are many deadends. |
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03/04/2003 11:13:21 PM |
| i love this! fits the challenge perfectly. simple and good colors. great work! |
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03/04/2003 06:39:52 PM |
| Exept for a possible collision with these barrells, the lines lead you straight out of the picture. I kind of like it anyway. gives a sensation of speed somehow. |
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03/04/2003 02:09:37 PM |
| I like this. I find the composition very appealing, the lines running through at the angle you chose does this photo a lot of justice. Using those two drums and the negative space is the icing on the cake. |
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03/04/2003 12:39:21 AM |
| Great shjopt, very creative meets the ch allenge extremely well. Who would have thought trash cans would have made such an interesting photo. The only thing I might change is the grainy look to the bleachers, although my guess is a good deal of it is 'natural'. Good luck. 9 |
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03/03/2003 07:45:47 PM |
| It is difficult to tell what the subject is here. I assume the barrels? The lines do not really draw my eye to them. Although the challenge is `lines`, they are used to draw the eye to the subject and not be the total emphasis of the shot. Interesting lighting use here. I like that! -Clicker- |
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03/03/2003 04:21:45 PM |
| Don't mess with texas :) the diagonal here is nice and the leading lines are ok.. the more dominant lines lead out of the frame... - setzler |
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03/03/2003 02:06:03 PM |
Good find and on subject.
Focus and light are not great but I like the idea here. |
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03/03/2003 10:29:56 AM |
| good use of color,focus is spot on ,just not enough impact. |
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