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03/12/2003 11:53:17 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB
Challenge: Met the challenge perfectly, while still being very creative and clever.
Technique: The only thing I would suggest here is to not use the on-camera flash. It adds alot of "wash" to the image and causes a large shadow behind the bird. Simply by using high power lights, or even natural outdoor lighting (through a window), this image would have had much more depth and clarity.
Overall: A great idea that just needed some technical cleaning. |
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03/09/2003 09:56:46 PM |
| I like the color in this photo. |
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03/08/2003 05:09:01 PM |
| Colorful-- the flash washed out a bit in the upper lef, though. Otherwise, nice colors. |
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03/08/2003 10:43:37 AM |
| Good photo, doesn't do much for me though. |
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03/07/2003 11:12:19 PM |
| Great expression caught on the bird! A clever idea that may be more effective with some different angles and levels of light rather than just a flash. |
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03/07/2003 03:51:26 PM |
| Neat shot! Too bad you had to flash this (shadows and glare). Color seems a little muted, but pretty good (esp. the wings of the parrot). Challenge met. 6 Swash |
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03/07/2003 11:50:58 AM |
| This would be great with a black background. |
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03/06/2003 07:42:46 PM |
| LOL!!! Great title - good expression on the bird - looks quite proud and concerned at the same time!! Lighting is a bit harsh/background not great, but I like the overall photo. 7 |
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03/05/2003 11:40:29 PM |
| Good concept, but the flash is a little harsh on this. If the lighting in the room is bad, I would try shooting on a tripod without flash and brightening it if necessary afterwards |
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03/05/2003 08:25:35 PM |
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03/04/2003 08:03:53 PM |
| Lovely bird.... (I have a Congo Grey & a Pionus myself). As far as the photo, I would have chosen a plain background so as not to distract from your nice photo composition. Also, I might have tried to use more natural light instead of a flash (caused distracting shadows behing bird). Like the title for this shot! |
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03/04/2003 07:50:22 PM |
| i like the pose of the bird along with the title |
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03/04/2003 07:43:19 PM |
| Very creative, but you need to work on your lighting. Looks like an on camera flash with way too much glare. A side light or two her would have really cut the glare and brought out the colors. |
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03/04/2003 03:54:58 PM |
| I liked the idea and set-up, the flash did you wrong. |
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03/03/2003 11:09:24 PM |
| the flash muddles the background some. does he/she pose for you? bit on the bright side. the feet are an interesting area. May be a good idea for something later |
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03/03/2003 10:56:32 PM |
| I love it. You're going to get hit about the background, but I still love it. Great focus, unique composition, nice execution, and one of a kind. It's well worth an 8. |
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03/03/2003 07:53:32 PM |
| Too many colors. Wallpaper is distracting. |
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03/03/2003 05:06:30 PM |
| What a sweet bird. He looks like he would be a talker. Looks like he's keeping an eye on that camera. Good shot. |
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03/03/2003 02:18:00 AM |
| An instant 9/10 for the much-appreciated humour ! |
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03/03/2003 12:41:51 AM |
| ha ha ha ha. Terrific!!!! |
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