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01/30/2005 02:13:25 AM |
| Nice candid portrait, good exposure under what looks like tricky lighting conditions. |
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01/30/2005 12:39:28 AM |
| The face in the background is very distracting. |
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01/24/2005 07:29:26 PM |
| I realize it would have been difficult to crop the face in the back, but it feels necessary to me- it distracts from the main subject. Lovely bokeh! |
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01/24/2005 09:57:34 AM |
ok, please bear with me. voting this challenge is extremely difficult, not just because of the size, but because we are dealing with images that people consider their best. it makes even constructive criticism hard...
it's not that i could tell you what would make this a better image--i can't. what i can tell you is that i don't see anything in it that is going to grab me as a viewer/voter and make me go "wow!" she is a nice looking girl, and i'm sure she's capable of a range of expressions and emotions, but you haven't given me any of that. one of the 'challenges' is to pick entries that will generate positive reactions from a broadbase of viewers; you don't want to pick entries that either don't register, or worse, foster negative reactions. it is obvious that you have a decent camera, and i am sure that this does not represent your best work. with that, i'll wish you good luck with this, and better luck in the challenges to come. just think of this as a starting point for the rest of the year. good luck in the challenges yet to come! |
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01/24/2005 02:40:10 AM |
| NIce portrait, good dof, could do without the face in the background, but otherwise this is a solid shot. Also, it might be worth trying to spot edit a couple of the blemishes on her face - she is a very pretty girl, but they distract from the rest of her face a little. |
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01/18/2005 12:14:33 PM |
| JUST EMPHASIZED A BAD MAKE UP JOB. |
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01/16/2005 10:30:40 PM |
| Interesting look.. I might have cropped it just in front of her ear, losing most of the hair... more drama that way? |
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01/16/2005 03:42:45 PM |
| I would suggest cropping off the left of this to get rid of the other face in the corner. Also, if she had turned a bit more towards you I think that would have avoided the dark shadows on that side of her face. |
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01/16/2005 02:11:53 PM |
| might have cropped this right at the edge of the back of her head. that way you wouldn't have the other person distracting the point of view. |
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