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03/22/2003 08:35:52 PM |
Deserted bridge
By mayas
Critique by Silver Fox
Composition photo of the bridge is pretty good as is the depth of field.
It fit the Challenge just fine.
Your photograph is very busy with the walls of the cliffs surrounding the bridge and the trees overhanging it with all the tree limbs. It would perhaps have been better if you could have taken the shot a bit lower down to try and get away from so many distractions to take a look at the bridge from the other direction.
The visual interest of the bridge is brought alive by the whiteness and the strong lighting coming from above the tree levels.
Your focus is strong on the tree line in front but you start to lose the sharpness as one starts to look towards the bridge itself.
Your photograph shows good concept and inspiration and is really interesting to look at.
This is only your second piece that you’ve entered into the DP Challenge and I would encourage you to shoot more images and have some fun and enter more challenges in the coming weeks and months. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Sincerely,
Ed
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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03/16/2003 03:41:44 PM |
wow, what fantastic lighting |
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03/15/2003 01:02:27 AM |
Wow, what a gorgeous place! The lighting is amazing - really a very cool shot. |
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03/13/2003 05:32:22 PM |
Looks cool! I really like the foreground, but your bridge is a bit obscured and seems less than sharp (like the trees in front are sharp). 6 Swash |
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03/13/2003 05:00:19 PM |
What a place for a bridge to be found. very colorful place too. |
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03/12/2003 10:31:18 AM |
Soooooooo interesting. Nice lighting! |
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03/10/2003 09:04:15 PM |
Not enough Bridge, too hidden, too much road. |
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03/10/2003 06:11:00 PM |
Very good but... You should have got all the way down on ground to shot this... That would have given a clearer shot of the bridge. |
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03/10/2003 02:39:39 PM |
good photo, i like the idea. |
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03/10/2003 02:36:28 PM |
Nice image. But it seems to need something more. The way it was shot the image looks kind of plain. |
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03/10/2003 01:34:58 PM |
I think if you got closer or maybe shot it from the other side would have improved this shot. All of the branches in the way of the bridge distract too much and take away from the main subject of this shot. |
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03/10/2003 11:57:37 AM |
Unique bridge. Good eye! I wish it and the complex landscape were more in focus. |
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