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New and old Carlton Bridge
New and old Carlton Bridge
kblm


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Bridges (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-S70
Location: Bath Maine
Date: Mar 8, 2003
Date Uploaded: Mar 8, 2003

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Place: 202 out of 229
Avg (all users): 4.5276
Avg (commenters): 4.4615
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Views since voting: 859
Votes: 199
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03/19/2003 03:10:52 PM
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat

COMPOSITION
I like how you have composed this shot so that the bridges lead the eyes through the frame, and then rest on teh structure on the right. It is a neat contrast of the bridges.

TECHNIQUE
Your focus does seem to be a bit off. Were you using a tripod? If not, and you don't have one, a lot of times you can get by with using a bag with flour, rice, or something like that in it as a portable bean bag. Put the bag on something, then rest the camera on it. this eliminates any camera/hand shake. Or, since it looks like it was a bright day, I would also try to use a fast shutter speed.

You have some nice colors, but overall teh picture is a little flat. Maybe add some saturation or play with the contrast levels some if you can. That may help bring out the details in your picture. Also, if you have a polarizer, that may have helped your colors have more depth to them.

OVERALL EFFECT
This is a nice picture to look at, and you have met the challenge well.

Best to you in future challenges.
karmat
 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/16/2003 08:45:08 PM
Nice angle, could have been a bit sharper.
03/16/2003 01:18:09 PM
Image is a little soft. I don't know if that was intentional.
03/15/2003 10:48:23 AM
This would be a much better shot if it were clearer. The composition has some nice elements to it with both bridges side by side. The old bridge is far more interesting. A lot of perspectives are possible for this place that could be very effective in terms of conveying a little message.
03/14/2003 11:58:09 PM
Good perspective for contrasting these two bridges. Quite out of focus,however, and may be even more dramatic with more interesting light.
03/13/2003 07:53:37 PM
Too Blurry
03/13/2003 03:51:57 PM
Seems just a little soft on the focus side but I really like the composition and lines. Good luck with the challenge!
03/13/2003 02:18:33 AM
Nice shot, but not very clear focus
03/11/2003 07:29:18 PM
Nice contrast between the two bridges. Challenge well met (two for the price of one!!) Color seems pretty good. Focus - the cement bridge seems to look much better than the steel one. 5 Swash
03/11/2003 03:13:02 PM
Great shot of the two bridges, nice colours too, I like the concrete bases on the old one with the different colours in them, and then of course the stark white/gray of the concrete of the new bridge with the shadows from the older bridge. Nice job.
03/11/2003 10:09:41 AM
focus seems too soft. nice contrast.
03/11/2003 02:11:40 AM
Bad light selection and poor jpeg quality!
03/10/2003 05:37:11 PM
The focus isn't very good. Nice angle on the bridges however.
03/10/2003 01:47:28 PM
Detail is ruined by a much too low jpeg quality. This one is 40 out of 150kb, there is a lot of room for better compression (less of it!). It would look less soft, edges sharper and render more detail.


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