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03/19/2003 10:44:35 AM |
Greetings Josh.
Critique by Silver Fox.
You certainly meet the Bridges Challenge with this photograph.
This is outstanding work. Great depth and detail; It's a long DOF, good details nice prespective, excellent lighting for the tme of day, wonderful composition. It's one heck of a long walking bridge.
Focus is just fine, nice and sharp at the front,down towards the middle as you would expect.
I like the way you've got the two puddles on the wood on the right side but at the same time, they could be distracting to many viewers.
And I also like the way the wooden boards on both sides work as lines leading the eyes right towards the person walking at the end of the bridge.
You have good exposure, and you show good tones both in the wood and steel.
Excellent photography in my opinion. Keep shooting!
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03/15/2003 01:10:53 AM |
Nice lines, nice tones, interesting contrasts. Out of focus. |
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03/14/2003 02:31:38 PM |
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03/13/2003 01:10:06 AM |
Reminds me of the Bay Bridge from San Fransco to Oakland |
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03/11/2003 09:00:23 PM |
nice perspective. seems a little soft though |
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03/11/2003 10:04:04 AM |
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03/10/2003 11:59:08 PM |
Wow. Great DOF. Great tones. Just look at that wood and steel beams. And you've caught a person at the other end walking. . . just great work ! ! |
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03/10/2003 09:50:46 PM |
Leads you into the photo realy well. |
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03/10/2003 01:42:59 PM |
Excellent depth of field! DEEP |
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03/10/2003 01:37:51 PM |
Terrific perspective and shot is very well aligned. |
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03/10/2003 12:41:48 PM |
Fascinating bridge-- nice perspective, perfect tone! If I were doing the shot, I might have cropped out (or if not on DPC, subdued/slightly blurred in Photoshop) the reflections in the foreground. My attention is immediately drawn there, and I have to force my eyes to the rest of the shot. |
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03/10/2003 08:56:54 AM |
Excellent. Perhaps the odd areas in the bottom right could be eliminated by walking forward a bit. |
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