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02/20/2005 04:56:44 PM |
gina
I have two criticisms of this image: the composition and the tocal range.
Compositionally, the points of focus are the center of the roses; the lower right rose is well placed, but the left rose could be moved into the image more, to place it's center in a more powerful position, and to eliminate that black space between the roses that prevents them from being one 'subject'. The frame could be opened to prevent the top of the frame from decapitating so much of the upper rose.
Exposure-wise, this needs to be opened up a half stop or so. The colors suffer from desaturation, and the specular lights aren't crisp enough. After lightening this image up, the details could be enhanced by tweaking the contrast.
Just my thoughts. |
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02/14/2005 12:31:30 AM |
| Great details in this,,, I like the drops of water. |
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02/12/2005 12:43:18 PM |
| I like this image because of the coloring. Beautiful. 7 on first pass. |
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02/08/2005 12:43:55 AM |
Good shot. I would have scored this higher if the top rose had not been cut off.
Focus is excellent. |
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02/07/2005 09:46:06 PM |
| I like the idea and these are gorgeous roses. I think the composition suffersf from having the empty area in the bottom right and the other two roses cut off. It appears to me to be a somewhat unbalanced look. Also, the water drops are nice but the overall lighting is very dark and it doesn't bring out the color. I'll bet they smelled good! |
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