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03/30/2003 10:58:14 PM |
Comments by Grayce for the Critique Club
You chose a nice mix of colors for this lovely still life. Zooming in and "supersizing" the subjects works well here, since you eliminate any distractions.
I like how the carrots are reflected in the celery. Everything looks nice and fresh, and I can almost smell them.
The black background is good as a contrast to the colorful veggies.
For the most part the dof is good, but the carrots are not quite as crisply focused as they could be. As a result there is no real detail on them.
The composition is very good, with the celery drawing the viewer right in.
Lighting is good, colors are very good. There is no noise or digital artifacts.
All in all a very nice picture. Congratulations and keep up the good work!
Regards,
Grayce |
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03/22/2003 11:01:08 PM |
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03/22/2003 05:36:01 PM |
| Wow. Superb close-up. Seems to have a huge DoF, but then it makes the veggies seem huge to start with. Great shot. |
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03/20/2003 11:58:41 AM |
Composition is good, nice idea for the photo, certainly meets the Challenge.
Visual impact is pleasant to the eyes. Focus is good except that the celery sees out of focus, Lighting looks fine but there's a bit of harsh light coming off the onion, Color seems just right and the black background seems a good choice.
Question: Why enlarge everything so big? Why not leave it smaller and add more vegetables?
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03/19/2003 09:41:20 AM |
| You brought the colors out wonderfully! Good job. |
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03/18/2003 02:03:05 PM |
| Your lighting and focus on this is exceptional! Th light glare in the onion is a distraction, but could definitely be fixed in a post-challenge edit. |
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03/17/2003 11:04:06 AM |
| It would be good with more evenly distributed lighting, |
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03/17/2003 08:14:58 AM |
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03/17/2003 03:38:28 AM |
| Lovely, colorful colection, also arranged very well spatially. |
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