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02/16/2005 07:09:53 AM |
AFTER THE CHALLENGE: Gave you a 5, on second look I wish I could bump it up to a 7. The pose and message are excellent, but I do think you could improve the lighting and focus just a bit. Don't take offense, just an honest opinion. Keep on shootin'. |
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02/16/2005 02:48:50 AM |
I liked this one, gave it a 7. I think you did a good job of conveying pain... the negative space really works for it by giving it a sense of isolation. As others said, though, it is a tad dark. Just a bit of curves adjustment would really give this photo some oomph. |
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02/15/2005 11:45:47 PM |
wow, I think that you did an excellent job with the negative space, b&w, and soft focus. The title/quote is most appropriate. Great work. |
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02/14/2005 10:39:10 PM |
Even for a low-key photo, it appears very dark. It lacks detail. |
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02/14/2005 08:27:07 PM |
too dark, and i don't think you need all the black space |
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02/14/2005 05:21:43 AM |
Image needs some white. This is 90% black and 10% dark gray. Lacking midtones and highlights. |
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02/14/2005 01:38:01 AM |
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02/13/2005 07:19:24 AM |
Sorry but this is very very dark |
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02/12/2005 02:01:44 PM |
too dark to see what is going on here |
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02/11/2005 10:20:00 AM |
I see where you were going with this, but without the title you don't know where this is going. |
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02/10/2005 02:29:46 PM |
focus and contrast could be better |
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02/09/2005 11:47:41 PM |
i find this a bit too dark but otherwise a very emotional photo |
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02/09/2005 08:28:35 PM |
great shot. are the members of DPC ready for this? I love it, then again, I,m not a photographer, i'm a artist :) 9 |
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02/09/2005 08:25:39 PM |
I like this a lot. But, it's just a little too dark. |
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02/09/2005 08:07:42 PM |
one of the top shots. i find the emotional pain shots more interesting. however, not many of them show pain as well as yours. the negative space really brings out the sence of emptiness well. |
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02/09/2005 04:00:20 PM |
Interesting idea that could have worked, unfortunately the lighting in this picture is not ideal and it seems to me to be a bit out of focus, although this may be intentional. (5) |
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02/09/2005 03:34:01 PM |
so dark it is hard to see whats going on. I see the idea, but lighting could be stronger. |
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02/09/2005 02:34:15 PM |
Dude, you were right, it looks way too dark on PC screens. |
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02/09/2005 09:27:44 AM |
Not bad, but the message is conveyed more by the title than the pic. More contrast or more face/expression on the model. |
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02/09/2005 08:56:06 AM |
Some people may say this photo is too dark, but on the contrary I think you nailed it perfectly. I like the remnance of the subject the way it is. Nice job, good luck. |
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02/09/2005 01:19:59 AM |
I love the thought, but I can barely make the subject out, maybe a bit brighter. |
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02/09/2005 12:43:29 AM |
Needs more light. Good concept. |
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