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03/26/2003 08:20:46 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi NeonSpirit...
I like your idea on this photo quite a bit. I really enjoy a photo that is somewhat abstract where the shapes and textures are the main element of the image. This particular photo offers quite a bit of that.
Compositionally, I think there may be room for a minor improvement by rotating the camera just a little so that the lines formed by the tops of the bottles create diagonals in the frame rather than horizontal/vertical lines. There is a slight diagonal from left to right, but I think a stronger diagonal could possibly create a stronger composition.
This image may also be a good candidate for a black and white image. The bit of amber color that is available here does offer a bit of a unique touch, but there is not enough color to rule out the option of trying this in grayscale. A grayscale version would possibly further enhance the subject of shape and texture by eliminating that small bit of color in the image...
Excellent shot and keep up the great work :)
John Setzler
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03/23/2003 09:15:06 PM |
| I like the lighting in this photo. |
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03/23/2003 02:28:50 AM |
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03/21/2003 12:03:51 AM |
This is a pretty nice picture of some bottles. Composed well. I would like to see this with higher, exaggerated contrast - it might turn into art. Still, a good image.
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03/19/2003 10:06:55 PM |
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03/19/2003 05:48:59 PM |
| Very well done! I like the limited color range; tone and contrast are perfect for this shot. |
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03/18/2003 09:14:13 PM |
| I like the colors of these bottles. Good focus. |
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03/18/2003 02:41:57 PM |
| nice image, creative idea |
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03/18/2003 01:34:27 AM |
Excellent shot from above, certainly meets challenge.
nice colours from bottles, nice lighting also.
composition is good.
focus is fine, nice and sharp. |
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03/17/2003 06:49:49 PM |
| interesting abstract... the contrast is nice and the circles of the bottle tops stand out nicely... excellent shot :) - setzler |
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