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04/03/2003 10:00:27 PM |
Critique Club Assignment:
Initial: This reminds me of my late grandparents. Their whole body language with each other... they are comfortable friends who have been thru it all together. Congrats to them!
Technical: Their natural closeness is depicted well here, however their straight on stance in the composition and the flat lighting leaves a snap shot feel to it. Not that it makes it terrible, .. snapshots are valuable. But if you had been able to do something to kick it up a knotch - like help to arrange their positions to each other, use a more solid background, or leave more space between them and the background to give less dof or focus on the background - then I feel it may have scored higher.
Overall, I love their expressions, and in the end you were right to just catch it.
So..there's the two sides of it :0)
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03/30/2003 11:41:41 PM |
| I love the happy expression on their face, and the naturalness of their pose. Nice capture. |
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03/28/2003 03:46:27 PM |
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03/27/2003 04:01:03 PM |
| Nice clear image. Good idea as well. I think that maybe a better background would have added more to the photo. |
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03/26/2003 06:36:24 PM |
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03/26/2003 11:52:32 AM |
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03/25/2003 11:33:13 AM |
| Congratultaions! And many, many more. |
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03/25/2003 05:15:24 AM |
i think a single b&w portrait would have been better.. close cropping..
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03/24/2003 10:12:12 PM |
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03/24/2003 06:00:07 PM |
| VERY nic photo. Great looking couple, I love her arm draped over his shoulder. |
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03/24/2003 03:23:58 PM |
| Fantastic, congrats to them...look like fine folks. Good job. |
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03/24/2003 01:46:58 PM |
| a good photography of the happy couple verygood overall |
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03/24/2003 11:49:09 AM |
| What a great shot! Wish the wall behind them wasn't so close to the color of her hair. (I also wish it were MY photo. NICE capture!) |
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