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03/20/2005 05:22:45 PM |
| Slightly too much shadow to the left hand side and I would have prefered a focus at the front receeding backwards but a good entry anyhow |
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03/18/2005 08:21:08 AM |
| This is a wonderful idea but I think the execution could have been improved. The lighting is too irregular and the large shadowy areas on the left detract from the regular, patterned appearance. The dof is a little too shallow too. I think you might have zoomed in closer, fewer pencils (or whatever) and brought out more detail and sharpness. Together with more uniform lighting, it could've been a visually arresting photo. As is, it's interesting, but not quite there... |
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03/17/2005 11:01:42 PM |
| This is a good idea, but unfortunately it is not real sharp and I think an image like this needs to be tack sharp. A different perspective that would eliminate the right hand background would be more interesting. |
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03/15/2005 11:01:52 PM |
| Nice concept. Lighting and focus could have been better. Good Luck. |
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03/14/2005 08:34:00 PM |
| I find both the lighting and composition awkward-not sure why it is necessary to include so much of the wall. |
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