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03/22/2005 11:53:10 PM |
| Looks like a vacation snapshot. No punch. |
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03/22/2005 07:12:08 PM |
| I think an offcenter composition would work better. |
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03/21/2005 11:04:30 PM |
| This is a tough one to comment on. I think I need to just go with my first impression, which was: "What am I supposed to be looking at?" There is not really a point of focus in this image. The dock poles are in focus, but they are sort of divided up, so my eyes go in two directions. Then there is a seagull that is center stage, but not really occupying enough of the picture in comparison to the poles to keep the eye on that spot. I think the idea was there, but maybe a slightly better composition would have upped the wow factor. |
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03/21/2005 05:15:04 PM |
| I find the composition a little static and the lighting uninteresting - being from behind it leaves everything flat. The gull is interesting, but I find it distracting that the horizon passes right through his abdomen. |
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03/21/2005 07:49:36 AM |
looks more like a snapshot
seems to have focus issues |
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