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03/31/2003 08:24:54 PM |
Critique Club:
Meeting the Challenge: Very well done. It might well have been named eyes of rage, and seemed to be taken that way by some of the commenters.
Composition: I like the way you cropped this photo in a non-traditional format which intensified your subject. The drawing on the left eye (as I view it) also helps keep it from being boring by being too symmetrical. B/W makes the image even more dramatic. I liked the veins in the eyes showing to add to the intensity of the feeling.
Technical Quality: Good, although I would have liked to have seen more dof, as the focus is pretty intense on the nose bridge and softens up a lot at the eyes. The white specks are a little distracting in the forehead to me and the dark specks below the eyes, also.
Creativity: Excellent on this respect, very original idea, really liked it.
Overall, I think this photo was a little under-scored in the challenge, but it seems a lot of really nice photos end up below 5.5 lately. I would have at least given it a six, and without the specks and a little more focus likely at least an 8.
Hope this was helpful, let me know if you have any questions. Kandice |
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03/30/2003 11:52:52 PM |
| Ooohh she scares me! Nice photo. |
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03/28/2003 08:16:38 PM |
| yikes! interesting shot... nice choice of b&w. |
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03/28/2003 03:33:29 PM |
| Interesting capture of emotion... The eyes can show volumes of words and emotion :) the makeup adds quite a bit as well in this photo... - setzler |
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03/26/2003 03:00:19 PM |
| I don't know about anger but sure scares the hell out of me. Had a crazy aunt with the same eyebrows, This was the best of the eye shots. |
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03/26/2003 12:30:16 PM |
| Beutiful, reminds me of my girl friend |
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03/26/2003 12:00:38 AM |
| Nah, I don't think so, you're full of love, you're just pretending. . . |
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03/24/2003 11:19:36 PM |
| Good composition. Better focus on the etes and brighter highlights in the eye. |
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03/24/2003 09:35:28 PM |
| would have been better if the model used Visine or something, the bloodshot eyes are distracting but the composition is nicely done. |
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03/24/2003 09:26:46 PM |
| Oh man those eyes are absolutely freaky!!! Is she pushing them out some how? That's really bizzare!! |
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03/24/2003 01:34:07 PM |
| Intense shot. Good Luck to ya! |
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03/24/2003 12:46:27 AM |
| The complexion is a little flat. Kind of a scary photo. But a creative idea. |
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