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04/03/2003 05:38:47 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
The composition of this is simple, but effective, I think. It is composed tight enough that there is not a lot of wasted background space, adn it is clear what the subject of the photograph is.
TECHNIQUE
The focus here is very good. Great detail in the texture, especially on the side of the face. The lighting is a bit harsh, I think, causing some of it to almost blow out. the black adn white works well to give it a feeling of notalgia, but did you try sepia tones. That may have warmed it up a little bit.
OVERALL EFFECT
Though I saw the connection to time clearly, I suspect some voters may not have. This is a very good picture technically, and I like how you have shown the effect of time more than just a watch or numers. Good work and best to you in future challenges.
karmat
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03/30/2003 10:58:16 PM |
| This photo conveys how loved this darling stuffed animal was over the years. Great texture, lighting and DOF. |
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03/28/2003 01:37:18 PM |
| Velvetine doggie. I get it. Nice shot too. |
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03/27/2003 12:21:22 AM |
| Very intimate feel to this image, so the close up is very appropriate. The title makes this image really hit home. I'd like to see this with more interesting light, perhaps, but this brings up a wonderful array of emotions for me, so I consider it a good photo. |
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03/26/2003 12:33:14 PM |
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03/26/2003 08:10:44 AM |
| very adorable.. cool perception on time |
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03/24/2003 04:09:11 PM |
| This shot has a lot of character and is a well taken photo. I just dont see the TIME in it other than it being old. |
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