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04/12/2003 07:34:47 PM |
Critique Club:
Hiya Pep! My turn to get you on your Macro shot! First impressions, good lighting, color is good although I've never seen a computer card in this color before, did you change the colors in the post processing? The composition is neat, and although the image gets darker the lower you look, it isn't a distraction. The smudge in the top right hand corner is a little bothersome however, but as no spot editing is allowed you couldn't do too much about it.
The reds and blue complement each other very well. Personally I would have prefered this image a little sharper, but other than that it is an excellent submission.
Good job!
Gary |
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04/06/2003 10:27:39 PM |
| Your lighting more than anything else, perhaps, give this chip a sense of mystery and awe, which is enhanced by your title. Super job. |
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04/05/2003 11:31:58 PM |
| ya know?...it DOES look like a hieroglyphic! very imaginative shot! |
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04/04/2003 10:28:34 PM |
| Nice techno patterns with good colors. |
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04/02/2003 02:21:51 PM |
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04/01/2003 09:58:35 PM |
| nice abstract! are the colors really like that? or was it oversaturated? I like it.. just wondering. |
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04/01/2003 12:22:52 PM |
| Very nice shot of modern technology. Nice colors are being used here also. Good focus, and of course you've used good lighting to obtain your photo. I think your use of the red and blue Framing makes it look like it's "part" of the Technological Hieroglyphic and distracts from your work. |
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04/01/2003 12:54:21 AM |
| Good title and very creative entry. |
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03/31/2003 10:30:30 PM |
| Very clever idea. Finger print or shadow on white area is distracting. Nice glyph though. |
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03/31/2003 02:49:52 AM |
| Good idea. For some reason, it doesn't 'grab' me though. Perhaps it needs something to give it a sense of scale? |
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