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04/25/2005 04:37:56 PM |
| Would have worked well for moods as well. I might have cropped it a bit tighter, I find the pattern on the curtains a bit distracting, but doesnt detract from an emotive image. |
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04/25/2005 11:27:19 AM |
| Nice atmosphere very good light on the girl, but not too keen about the blank wall behind her |
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04/25/2005 10:03:31 AM |
| Very nice use of color - I like the way the green of her clothing, headskarf are picked up by the leaves and the window frame also looks green. shapes too: leaves, paisley print and her ear lips and collarbone. |
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04/25/2005 01:40:41 AM |
| I wish there was just a tiny little bit more light on her face. Overall, very well done! |
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04/24/2005 11:37:25 PM |
| Since this is a composition based on light and shadow, I would have probably chosen to make it a black&white or some duotone, also I think it would have a much better impact if you would crop more from the right, up over her sholder. Anyways I like it, verry nice pose and I really like how the light is working. Good luck! |
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04/24/2005 05:20:50 PM |
| wish you had made better use of that nice window light. Her face is too dark - can't make up my mind whether you intended a silhouette shot or what. the title, though not influencing my vote, is trite and, imo, demeaning to the gender. |
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04/24/2005 02:41:09 PM |
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04/24/2005 02:19:41 AM |
| Her face is a little dark for me. |
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04/24/2005 12:06:51 AM |
| the molding coming out behind her neck is distracting. Remember to look at what is behind your subject not just at the subject |
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04/22/2005 04:34:10 PM |
| Nice light. But, composition? I'm not convinced that this is really strong - or rather, as strong as this scene could be: it might feel less likely, but a half pace to your right, and you'd have an expanse of light with your model in her beautiful light to one side quite strongly. Just a thought, but I can almost picture it. |
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04/19/2005 04:42:12 PM |
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