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04/10/2003 01:01:51 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
This photo has a very interesting composition. I'm sure that the white border part on the side bothered a lot of viewers but I understand that you couldn't crop it out without also cropping the purple butterfly on the right as well. In some way I think it would have been better if you had included a bit more of it to make the composition a little more balanced. The colors are excellent. The focus looks a slight bit blurry but I have the feeling that was the subject itself and not your photography technique. I also see this as a plate, which doesn't really matter, but it's confusing me now that I know it's a coffee/tea cup, but whatever it is the artwork on it is really all you have to work with, therefore if people don't like it they aren't going to like the photo, which may be the biggest problem. Technically, there's not much wrong with it. The top and bottom seem a bit dark and there appears to be some dust and scratches, but again, I'm not sure if that is your lighting or the actual painting of the item. With a indoor macro challenge I think a large part of it is the subject that you choose. I thought this was a fine subject that inticed my mind into a nice warm spring that I'm more than ready for. Keep up the good work!
Message edited by author 2003-04-10 13:03:44. |
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04/06/2003 06:11:41 PM |
| Great colors! Composition could be better without the white border on the right. |
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04/06/2003 01:09:10 PM |
| Excellent colors and focus. I don't know what's on the right, but I don't like it at all. I would have either put more of it in or cropped it completely. 9 |
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04/04/2003 11:29:30 PM |
| I like the bright colors. The edge on the right does not add to the effect. |
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04/02/2003 08:03:58 PM |
| Boy! Is this shot just a week too early? Great color. Why even include the edge of the plate? |
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04/01/2003 12:31:26 PM |
| Oh, lovely colours! Is this natural light shining through? Good focus. Nice thin line for your Framing. |
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03/31/2003 04:49:10 PM |
| Colors are good, the focus is good----but not very macro. The crop is not centered. Sorry. |
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