In my view you could certainly pull all the levels across the entire photo down a good deal: all the colours are badly washed out. The greens have become very bland, the blossom colour is almost nothing, the leaves remain almost indistinguishable. I'm not sure you have a great image even beneath that: as far as there is a main point for the eye to fall on it's the grass - the trees seem almost secondary, partly because of that largely grey colour, partly simply your placing of them in frame. It looks like you have good light though, it's just your capture of it - try placing those clouds of blooms on a stronger line visually, such as a diagonal from corner to corner, or a converging pair of lines that draw the eye into a focal point and out again; from what i see here, I would think a few steps forward and a few to the right, and shooting along that far line of trees, would give you a far more successful image. |