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04/30/2005 04:01:41 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Hi Lastef...
This is an interesting composition, but it also seems to be one that needs some sort of context other than what is provided to make it more interesting. When photographing people for a challenge, (or for anything in fact) you need to create something that helps a third-party viewer identify with your subject in some way. You need to make me interested in who I see. As far as your post processing is concerned, if you achieved what you wanted, it's fine. The color hues here are a bit strange for me. The skin tones don't seem normal and there is a blue/green cast throughout the rest of the image, including his hair. There is nothing wrong with doing things this way, but they need to serve a visible and identifiable purpose when posting them for public review most likely. |
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04/24/2005 11:28:24 PM |
Well, it's not your score, that is down here. :)
Just kidding - just yankin yer chain. This is an interesting composition, but maybe cut too much of him out. Good focus and I like the colors and textures. Good luck. |
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04/24/2005 11:22:22 PM |
| nice composition and i like the cool tint to the photo... i dont like the border and wish the photo was slightly bigger |
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04/24/2005 10:38:22 PM |
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04/24/2005 10:23:59 PM |
| Nice use of negative space. |
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04/24/2005 06:40:07 PM |
| The border is distracting and I think for this type of composition you need to include his whole face. There's something uncomfortable about not seeing his ear and chin. |
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04/24/2005 02:15:17 PM |
| I feel as if this is tilted back a little too much? I like the simplicity of this photo. |
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04/24/2005 02:14:48 PM |
| interesting crop -- like that everything has the same color tones |
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04/24/2005 12:36:17 PM |
| risky crop but i like it..nice portrait |
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04/24/2005 06:56:22 AM |
| Nice attention to details, crisp focus. Well done. |
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04/22/2005 12:33:23 PM |
| Nice shot, This could have worked for minimalism as well!! |
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04/21/2005 02:42:41 AM |
| white balance is off otherwise wonderfull picture |
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04/20/2005 11:58:40 PM |
The hue is a bit too green for my tastes, and I'm not sure that I like the missing chin/ear. Good repetition of textures between his facial hair and the wall.
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04/19/2005 06:51:52 AM |
Nice and clear image although the person blends a little into the background...
Ãtt þú eitthvað à þessum kalli Lára? Nú kannast ég við hann af hattamyndinni.... |
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04/18/2005 05:23:03 PM |
| hmmmmmm I wonder why you shot this at this angle? |
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04/18/2005 02:22:49 PM |
| Really green portrait .. ir |
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04/18/2005 06:05:16 AM |
| I like the composition of this shot. It does seem to be a little washed out and to have a slightly green caste, but that's easy to take care of. Nicely done. |
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04/18/2005 01:45:53 AM |
| I like the cropping and background on this one. Well done |
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